it flows from spout to porcelain
and it hasn't rained like this in days
i'm a cold sweat in an awkward pause
but we all fumble for perfect words
where's the phrase thats going to turn her
as they all delve deep into pockets for the scrap of paper
carved with passion
that will no doubt ease their longing
another toast(milk) to this wet plant
who knows without knowing
the blindest eyes can hear the truth we miss between syllables
but no ones blessed or rested
we're all just serving time
and you can't dig forgiveness
without fucking up the perfect crime
Can there be a perfect crime? :P
ReplyDeleteBeautiful verse!You really weave the smell of earth into your words :)
kuch samajh sa nahi aaya :(
ReplyDeleteThe last para' says it all and true isn't it.
ReplyDeletemate sab bouncer gaya ;(
ReplyDeletewaaaahhhh ustad waaahh!!
ReplyDelete@ *~*{Sameera}*~*
ReplyDeleteif there was a perfect crime then we wouldn't know off it.
@ mayz
it ain't rocket science mate :D :D
my typing doesn't make sense to me also.It just have to be thrown out here to clean my mind.. :)
@ Priya
well it sure is ji
thnaku thnaku
@ Princess Mia
i was expecting you too play the hook shot ...hehe :D
@ ريانکا
ReplyDeletetajmahal tea ki yaad aa gayi.
:D
so well written...
ReplyDeletewhat do you have for breakfast???
ReplyDelete:O
you are a born poet :)
trying writing trash for a change....because im bored of commenting each time that your poem is "beautiful' 'breathtaking' etc etc :) lol!
do you remember that poem bachpan se...
ReplyDelete"fate served me meanly,
but i look at her and laughed
for none shall know
how bitter was the cup i quaffed
along came joy
and paused beside, where i sat,
saying, "i came to see
what you are laughing at.."
"the blindest eyes can hear the truth we miss between syllables"
ReplyDeleteAngreezi Gulzaar!
wao . beautiful thoughts.
WordWise u are.
i just love it vikram, these are all so true and i like the "blindest eye" line ;)
ReplyDeleteyet another great poem. well done you. like the ending with the naughty swear word haha!
ReplyDeletesorry you didnt make it in the first 5 to grab the awards. you can still grab it if you like, i wont tell ;)
@ Sachi
ReplyDeleteso thank you :)
@ phoenix
ok i am letting the secret out..
--two paranthas with curd. :) and sometimes i have oat meal. :D --
ok then ...i will try my best to trash my thoughts next time.
@ rain girl
yar bilkul yad nai...where did we read it..campus??
btw thanx for being her sis ..xoxo
@*Aham*
welcome here buddy.
thanks a ton for beautiful comment.
but kuch zyada ho gaya,bachhe ko chane ke jhaad pe chada rahe ho. :D
@ maria
thank you miss :)
that line is my fav too
@ tina
swearing i hate..but just can't do without it sometimes.
ok ok..i would grab it ..but whre is it?? :D
"and you can't dig forgiveness
ReplyDeletewithout fucking up the perfect crime"
though I won't use these exact word, I agree, cos u cant have a perfect crime n some1s being forgiven.
ssa V.
ReplyDeleteWaah Waah....it was bery bery nice!!!! :P Yes, I didnot mistype bery....I typed "B" intentionally. :D
Anyway....nice work yet again....I wonder how ur brain works sometimes, its pretty amazing....
Vik ! This was awesome !!!
ReplyDeleteSpellbinding !!!!!!!!
Loved the verses, each n every single one of them.
Loved the line,
"....the blindest eyes can hear the truth we miss between syllables"
Deep n profound !
Linking you.
@ OluwaDee
ReplyDeletethank you. :)
@ Gagan ssa ji
and another comment that makes me laugh :D :D
this will answer you question ;;)
http://www.epilepsytoronto.org/brain_java.html
@ Cinderella.
ReplyDeletei am flattered ji.
thank you
you are already blog rolled here.
:)