as he sensitively touches at this fragile pain
there’s portion to fill
and memories to meet
under all this stinging prestige
Few,they know where to float
the place they are meant to rise
he hopes to be among those few
but..when will the moment come,
the moment for him to dash away free
the length waiting upon his groping hands
living in the thoughtland
in-between the pains and Rains
he always extends his stay
his stupid lonely soul is dying
the only respite he has- is crying
just another hole left open
just another wish not granted
just another hour on the clock
just another minute passing by.
stumbling over words about me,myself,i,she,her & love.
...Just another verse yet a world of pain in its realms.Heartrending piece.
ReplyDeleteTake care bro.
@ *~*{Sameera}*~*
ReplyDeleteas they say..the sweetness lies
within the pain.
u r able to say things which i feel...n say them so beautifully!!! u rock dude
ReplyDeletelove the fact that there is always a reference to rain in everything you write...
ReplyDeleterain is like rebirth.
"living in the thoughtland
in-between the pains and Rains
he always extends his stay"
beautiful...
also love the fact that your way of expression is very simple..that makes it pure...
reading this almost makes me feel that pain is beautiful...
apna khayal rakhna...
You write beautifully!!
ReplyDeleteI dont want to comment on the post....You already know what I would want to say on the post, and so I am going to save mine, and your time by not doing that. Instead, I want to ask you a question....I want to know when can we meet? I want to meet you....Want to know what's in your heart....where does this sadness come from....and that too so perfectly....So, just let me know when, and I will be there!!!!
ReplyDeleteYou know they say "a painful heart makes the lovliest of verses". And this is a live scene we are witnessing here..
ReplyDeleteYou have rendered it so well, its almost that picturesque to be visualised thru.
b'ful...loved it...
ReplyDeleteNice!
ReplyDeleteIt touches you!
The rain again :)
ReplyDeleteThis was definitely not a brick in the wall.. Random questions too have a definite answer
the lessons we learn from pain, are the ones that make us the strongest
ReplyDeleteHi ,
ReplyDeleteI was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘smell of earth after rain...’ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too;
BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!
This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)
Cheers,
@ mayz
ReplyDeletei say the same about you all the time bro. :)
@Preeti
rain comes in without any effort.
me taking good care of myself ... ;)
thank you for your concerning comment ji.
you take good care of yourself too.
@ The Lover
ReplyDeletewelcome here..
nothing compared to you man..you have a lovely flow.
take care...
@ gagan
oh G we meet soon man..i am hoping i get the time to make it to chandigarh ...sadness is story of my life.
@ Cinderella.
thank you thank you... :)
i am just letting the feeling out.
you visualized it..wow...
thanx this comment has made me proud of myself.
@ Pooja
ReplyDeletethnku thanku pooja ji
@ Anindita
that's a gr8 compliment miss. thanx
@Prabhu Dutta Das
it's all about rain buddy
@ Princess Mia
ReplyDeletei hope you are right..this work for me in gym ..but in love, i can't say..
@ RAY
spammer bugger off