CarnEvil

Monday, August 11, 2008

monsoon rain

in the clouded haze
the concern of expecting drops
the sound of first drop kissing the earth
drenching in the rain
these moments
i could live forever there

all these diamonds
riding on the wet leaves

burnt heart smolder
tingle and shiver
in a monsoon rain
she slips as a whisper
these moments he leans in firmly

10 comments:

  1. Beautiful verse!I could almost feel the raindrops here :)

    Cool playlist you got there bro.TC.Cheers!

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  2. Nobody wants to miss the rain and always wait to enjoy it.

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  3. ammmmmmmmmmmaaaaaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzziiiiiiinnnnnnnggggggggggg:)
    blogrolling u 4 wriring buuuutttifulllyyy

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  4. this poem smells of the earth after rain...

    :)

    "all these diamonds
    riding on the wet leaves"...

    KYA BAAT HAI...
    MAASHALLAH!!!!

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  5. dude u rock man!!
    wat do u have for breakfast...how do u come up wid such posts man!!!

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  6. @ *~*{Sameera}*~*
    thanx sis
    i love my playlist too.

    @ rain girl
    thank you sis
    it means a lot when u say something here.

    @ priya
    i am sure everyone does.
    thanks for the visit ji

    @ think tank
    thanks tanku ji...
    will visit u soon

    @ Preeti
    o ji welcome welcome
    waah ustad waah bhi keh deti ;)

    @ hope
    welcome to the rain

    @ mayz
    buddy i will not share my secret breakfast with anyone.Trust me most people can't eat oat meal..ohh i spit it out..now u know bro .. :) hehe

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  7. @ kulpreet

    welcome here sir

    thanks for appreciating

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