these thoughts are like crackers
the innerspring shatters
and he places his head against the wall,
remembering those days of fun and fall
no route no path b/w myself
ahh..the dirges of missed love
To cover his thoughts
he trys to refurbish this broken heart
this vast unending overgrowing craving for love
engulfing overpowering drowning him,
filling the heart upto the brim
slowly scratching the inside walls,
looking for relevance malls
does he believes?
in himself, his cause?
looking at the horizon
having no destination.
I hope he can convince me.
P.S. --read this quote somewhere and had to share...
""Once hanged man feels invincible
twice hanged, and he finds truth
learns to keep reptile eyed friends
at arms length.""
Hehe....once again an earth shattering deep poem by Mr. V....I could not have been more impressed!
ReplyDeleteAnd yet again, you end up impressing me more....Love you brother....keep up the amazing work....I am just waiting for the day when you write something on me....hehe!
wow! where do you get these idea and what inspires you??
ReplyDeleteyou know I have somewhat same thing going in my mind...and I am sure many in bloggerville shall relate to it.
Besides, very b'fully put, "I hope he can convince me" :)
That longingness is something beautiful even before you start loving someone coz you never know whoz gonna hit first.
ReplyDeleteOnce again a wonderful poem! U r becoming one of my favorites!!
ReplyDeleteMay that craving be fulfilled and may he convince you.
ReplyDeleteAwesome words!Take care bro.
P.S. Nice quote :)
we ll crave for love, an innate feeling that is there in everything that we do and in everyone that we care.....
ReplyDeletebeautifully expressed
are you a poem factory or what? :P
\m/ you rock!
I hope he can convince me
ReplyDeleteman that line takes d cake...brilliantly put...
another gem from d box of V
happy rakhshabandhan bhai!!!! :)
ReplyDeleten i soo love that teddy ..m stealing it ;)
: )
ReplyDeleteGreat!!!
ReplyDeleteHave a nice weekend.
@ gagan
ReplyDeletessa G
hehe..your wish would be granted on your birthday..haha
@ Sach!
i dunno whenever i feel like writing something they just pop up.. ;)
thanx a ton for the praise. tc
@ Priya
so well said. :)
@ the lover
ReplyDeletelook who's saying this for me...dude you are thousands of miles ahead of me...and i really love the way yo write..write a novel win a bookers prize. cheers
@ *~*{Sameera}*~*
thank you...hope i find my happiness.
and belated Happy Rakhshabandhan day. :)
@ phoenix ehhe :)poem factory ..no yaar..it's just a phase ..when it passes i would be writing normal stuff.
tc
@ mayz
ReplyDeletethanks bro.
hope i can come up with more. :)
@ rain girl
hapy RB day to you too sis
mere teddy ki cloning aloud hai.
miss ya dear
@r2k
welcome here :)
@ david santos
ReplyDeletewelcome here sir.njoy ur weekend :)