CarnEvil

Wednesday, June 24, 2009

she's,

she's a heavenly thought
her heart is pure in billion distinct ways
like a searchlight,sparkling in my eye
she's pure like the touch of drops
like childhood sunsets
She's that time of the night
when everything is soaked in moonlight

she's a memory,i hope to create

...she's an arrow shot in the dark,...straight through my heart.

44 comments:

  1. bro i think d memory has alrdy been created

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  2. everything is soooo very pure here that even if she encloses herself inside ur memory...it will be d purest.

    loved it. :)

    take care :)

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  3. Damn V!!! lol hahaha

    I was feeling that one!

    Great job.

    Ne

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  4. beautiful!
    "she's an arrow shot in the dark...straight through my heart"....loved that line

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  5. @ rakesh

    la lla ilaaaaaa.... hehe

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  6. @ Mys Lykes Meeh

    ahem ahem...

    thanx

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  7. @ mayz

    only partially
    it's still one sided mate...

    ;D

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  8. @ preetilata

    aha...lovely comment
    thank you ji
    bearhugs

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  9. @ raingirl

    hugs n hugs sis... :D

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  10. @ Ne

    hehe... thanx a ton Ne

    you know i need you on this.
    you are my angel here...

    hugs n take care

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  11. @ Misty Rhythm

    welcome here ji

    thank you for taking your time to comment...

    tc

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  12. has the message been 'successfully' delivered? ;)

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  13. Memories... But they do last a lifetime!

    Loved it...

    Peace. Be well.

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  14. Beautiful :)

    Have a great weekend :)

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  15. Lovely! How are you my friend? Hope you're doing well. :D

    Life's sweets and spices

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  16. Good one. May I add my two cent worth too?
    As Mayz says, memory has been created. So perhaps you could change 'create' to either 'recreate' or 'vivify' or 'reanimate' or 'revive' or some similar word.

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  17. :) gud luck! Lucky she!! :))

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  18. Beautiful imagery...

    All the best!

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  19. Ahhh...babes...crushes and their repercussions.. :d.. :p

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  20. Wow! Kind of moves... But a little vague, What happened next?

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  21. love in air throughout..!!

    nicely written..

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  22. @ DPhatsez

    i wish i knew the answer... :(

    welcome here bro...

    tc

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  23. @ Kartz

    these memories were never meant to be mine,i guess :(

    tc bro n hugs

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  24. @ Miss Kido

    thank you :)

    same to you ji

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  25. @ Liza

    thank you Liza.

    i am well... just quit my job and going back to home sweet home.

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  26. @ indicaspecies

    lol :D lmao

    that was too good.. hehe

    thanks u brought a smile here..

    tc n hugs

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  27. @ Sach!

    i wish it was that way...

    you know... some people are never supposed to fall in love...i guess i am one.

    tc and hugs

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  28. @ Keshi

    'She' was a pure dream, but she was not supposed to be mine. :)

    tc keshi and hugssss

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  29. @ Ann Dee

    WElcome welcome
    and thankx a ton

    tc

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  30. @ Zubin

    agreed bro... where are u... i want to give u a hug... lol

    tc bro

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  31. @ Kulpreet

    what happens everytime '[V]' falls in love...lol a heartbreak :)

    i guess i am getting used to it now...

    tc bro n CHEERS (bade waala patiala peg)

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  32. @ Khamakha

    thnak you thank you

    tc n hugs

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  33. @ Vinz aka Vinu

    love was in the air...
    not it's just air ;)

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  34. Tennyson in the making....:)

    http://calvy.wordpress.com

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  35. @ saurabh agarwal

    thanks bro...
    missed you

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  36. @ Calvy

    hehe...

    miss u bro...

    where are u these days.

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  37. "..like childhood sunsets...",
    Simply beautiful!
    How do u create such immortal expressions..Very well!!

    And Vicky, by the way what makes you write
    "you know you are like my presonal coach... :D" in recent comment ...well whtever that meant...I take it as one of the best compliment/comment written.

    Keep the Spark Alive..
    Cheers:)

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  38. @ rachna

    thank you ji
    i wrote that coz i have been experimenting after reading you :D so u are like a personal coach.

    thanks a ton ji

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