she's a heavenly thought
her heart is pure in billion distinct ways
like a searchlight,sparkling in my eye
she's pure like the touch of drops
like childhood sunsets
She's that time of the night
when everything is soaked in moonlight
she's a memory,i hope to create
...she's an arrow shot in the dark,...straight through my heart.
Oh la la!
ReplyDeleteehem...
ReplyDeletenicely written.
bro i think d memory has alrdy been created
ReplyDeleteeverything is soooo very pure here that even if she encloses herself inside ur memory...it will be d purest.
ReplyDeleteloved it. :)
take care :)
awwwwwwwwwwwwww
ReplyDeleteDamn V!!! lol hahaha
ReplyDeleteI was feeling that one!
Great job.
Ne
beautiful!
ReplyDelete"she's an arrow shot in the dark...straight through my heart"....loved that line
@ rakesh
ReplyDeletela lla ilaaaaaa.... hehe
@ Mys Lykes Meeh
ReplyDeleteahem ahem...
thanx
@ mayz
ReplyDeleteonly partially
it's still one sided mate...
;D
@ preetilata
ReplyDeleteaha...lovely comment
thank you ji
bearhugs
@ raingirl
ReplyDeletehugs n hugs sis... :D
@ Ne
ReplyDeletehehe... thanx a ton Ne
you know i need you on this.
you are my angel here...
hugs n take care
@ Misty Rhythm
ReplyDeletewelcome here ji
thank you for taking your time to comment...
tc
has the message been 'successfully' delivered? ;)
ReplyDeleteMemories... But they do last a lifetime!
ReplyDeleteLoved it...
Peace. Be well.
Beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend :)
Lovely! How are you my friend? Hope you're doing well. :D
ReplyDeleteLife's sweets and spices
Good one. May I add my two cent worth too?
ReplyDeleteAs Mayz says, memory has been created. So perhaps you could change 'create' to either 'recreate' or 'vivify' or 'reanimate' or 'revive' or some similar word.
:) gud luck! Lucky she!! :))
ReplyDeletewho is SHE? :)
ReplyDeleteKeshi.
Beautiful imagery...
ReplyDeleteAll the best!
Ahhh...babes...crushes and their repercussions.. :d.. :p
ReplyDeleteWow! Kind of moves... But a little vague, What happened next?
ReplyDeletebeautiful...seriously!
ReplyDeletelove in air throughout..!!
ReplyDeletenicely written..
@ DPhatsez
ReplyDeletei wish i knew the answer... :(
welcome here bro...
tc
@ Kartz
ReplyDeletethese memories were never meant to be mine,i guess :(
tc bro n hugs
@ Miss Kido
ReplyDeletethank you :)
same to you ji
@ Liza
ReplyDeletethank you Liza.
i am well... just quit my job and going back to home sweet home.
@ indicaspecies
ReplyDeletelol :D lmao
that was too good.. hehe
thanks u brought a smile here..
tc n hugs
@ Sach!
ReplyDeletei wish it was that way...
you know... some people are never supposed to fall in love...i guess i am one.
tc and hugs
@ Keshi
ReplyDelete'She' was a pure dream, but she was not supposed to be mine. :)
tc keshi and hugssss
@ Ann Dee
ReplyDeleteWElcome welcome
and thankx a ton
tc
@ Zubin
ReplyDeleteagreed bro... where are u... i want to give u a hug... lol
tc bro
@ Kulpreet
ReplyDeletewhat happens everytime '[V]' falls in love...lol a heartbreak :)
i guess i am getting used to it now...
tc bro n CHEERS (bade waala patiala peg)
@ Khamakha
ReplyDeletethnak you thank you
tc n hugs
@ Vinz aka Vinu
ReplyDeletelove was in the air...
not it's just air ;)
so lovely..
ReplyDeleteTennyson in the making....:)
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@ saurabh agarwal
ReplyDeletethanks bro...
missed you
@ Calvy
ReplyDeletehehe...
miss u bro...
where are u these days.
"..like childhood sunsets...",
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful!
How do u create such immortal expressions..Very well!!
And Vicky, by the way what makes you write
"you know you are like my presonal coach... :D" in recent comment ...well whtever that meant...I take it as one of the best compliment/comment written.
Keep the Spark Alive..
Cheers:)
@ rachna
ReplyDeletethank you ji
i wrote that coz i have been experimenting after reading you :D so u are like a personal coach.
thanks a ton ji