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Saturday, October 10, 2009

i wait for you .

As the night begins to undress,
i wait for you .
Grasping at candles in the dark,
I wait for you .
Contradictions spinning tangled webs of thought,
i wait for you .
Heart plastered against walls,
i wait for you .
Caressing false hope,
i wait for you .

woven by rainboy at 10/10/2009 08:18:00 PM
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26 comments:

  1. AnwesaOctober 11, 2009 at 12:29 AM

    ....i dont know if i shud marvel at the beauty of the verse or shed a teardrop for the pain you bear...

    a real senti- post...

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  2. runnerfrogOctober 11, 2009 at 5:58 AM

    Just don't allow the waiting to make you miss the present moment.
    The poem is a good epiphora... never the medical-literary double sense fitted better ;-)

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  3. divsiOctober 11, 2009 at 10:21 AM

    :) beauty in emotions beauty in feelings all portrayed thru a simple n heartfelt poem:)
    I loved d names of both ya blogs. U won't write on dewdrops n leaves now?

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  4. Rakesh VanamaliOctober 12, 2009 at 11:48 AM

    Great words! I also agree with Christian!

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  5. AroojOctober 12, 2009 at 11:59 PM

    hmmm..wait..though is apparently a tiring phenomenon...yet it is essential for lioving a hopefull life.

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  6. LenaOctober 13, 2009 at 4:24 PM

    wait is hope... the hope in this poem is painful, you pictured emotions beautifully.

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  7. Commander ZaiusOctober 16, 2009 at 3:09 PM

    Glad you are back! Great verse and will be looking for more.

    I remember that feeling of waiting, of wondering if I had been tossed aside. Can't help it but there is someone even now I'm waiting to see if I hear from her again. Although, we said our goodbyes last year and she has moved on with someone else. But yet I still feel connected to her, guess I'm a major fool.

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  8. rainboyOctober 17, 2009 at 11:32 AM

    @ anwesa

    thank you for such a beautiful comment. :)

    tc and happy diwali to you

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  9. rainboyOctober 17, 2009 at 11:37 AM

    @ runnerfrog

    thanks bro...

    present is passing as i make plans for my future...
    :)
    thanks for coming over bro...


    tc and happy diwali to you

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  10. rainboyOctober 17, 2009 at 12:08 PM

    @ divsi

    thanks dear

    i love the names too...
    i just wrote on dewdrops :)

    tc n happy diwali

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  11. rainboyOctober 17, 2009 at 12:09 PM

    @ rakesh

    thanks bro :)

    me too agrees with him

    happy diwali bro

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  12. UnknownOctober 19, 2009 at 8:28 PM

    Ok, so I dnt knw what u r thinking....but yes, I just hope your wait turns out to be fruitful. And yes! I wait for you! :)

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  13. rainboyOctober 20, 2009 at 11:19 PM

    @ Heavenly Muse

    sometimes the wait may be endless...we ought to know when to stop waiting :)

    thanks for dropping by

    cheers n tc

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  14. rainboyOctober 20, 2009 at 11:23 PM

    @ Lena

    thank you lena. Thanks a lot. :)
    rain and pain... that's my life.


    tc n cheers

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  15. rainboyOctober 20, 2009 at 11:48 PM

    @ beach bum

    another major fool is here bro...
    hugs n cheers

    tc bro

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  16. rainboyOctober 20, 2009 at 11:49 PM

    @ gagan

    hey bro, i am coming by 15th will catch ya that's for sure...

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  17. SAURABH AGGARWALOctober 22, 2009 at 10:48 PM

    good one.. :)

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  18. rainboyOctober 24, 2009 at 5:40 PM

    @ Saurabh agarwal

    thanks bro...
    :)

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  19. LizOctober 26, 2009 at 11:52 PM

    It's a beautiful poem! You can wait forever, just make sure you don't miss the fun.

    Have a great week my friend. :)

    Life's sweets and spices

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  20. MysLykeMeehOctober 27, 2009 at 3:43 AM

    it's the waiting that drives me crazy...so i don't wait much...i act and move to get it!

    Anyway...if waiting is your number one virtue....(dude, I salute you!)

    Nice one.

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  21. rainboyNovember 7, 2009 at 1:54 PM

    @ Liza

    I know, and i am not waiting anymore...life's waiting for me :)

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  22. rainboyNovember 7, 2009 at 1:55 PM

    @ MyslykesMeeh

    waiting drives everyone crazy .
    IT's just that i take some time to act...:)

    don't salute me.I won't wait for noone anymore.

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  23. Rachana ShakyawarNovember 19, 2009 at 5:27 PM

    @ Vicky
    ...let us together CelebrateLife!
    Celebrate friendship amid in blogger's
    bonding..

    Kindly Collect your Award and Honour me!

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  24. rainboyNovember 20, 2009 at 12:03 PM

    @ Rachana Shakyawar

    :) thank a lot .That's so kind of you...i will be there shortly to collect.

    tc n cheers

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  25. pankajunkJanuary 24, 2010 at 3:15 AM

    caressing false hopes....

    whoa!

    beautiful expression that, and beautiful poem overall

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  26. rainboyFebruary 19, 2010 at 6:47 PM

    @ pankajunk :

    Welcome to Smell pankaj .

    Thank you :D

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