CarnEvil

Sunday, November 8, 2009

sweet memories...

He's beside her; clasping her hand
staring at her innocent face; lost in dreams
lips;tender like rose petals
fighting the urge to kiss,to touch; He could never lose control
feeling sleepy; the shutters just won't close.
the sight was too precious; his eyes could never be sore
the smell of her hair,softness of her cheeks
He couldn't believe; He was living a dream

38 comments:

  1. Most is a dream. Maybe we're here to learn how to take control of our unbridled dreams, and ride them in the direction we must. Maybe the contrary, to learn how to unbridle our dreams and let them lead us wherever they could. But movement is always needed. Dynamics are the gold of nature.

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  2. exactly...movement is always needed.
    :)

    thank bro

    tc n hugs

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  3. As I have often wrote here in comments I have this memory of a special time with a lady that I pray will never go away. This poem did much to help refresh that one, too short of a time.

    I especially remember how her skin smelled as I held her.

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  4. @ BB
    thanks bro. You know i also pray to never lose the memory i have.
    I am so glad that you could connect to the poem.

    tc n cheers

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  5. Wow, a horny poem.... Muhahahaha....

    Sorry, just kidding.... After all I am allowed to say whatever crap I can...Hehe

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  6. If this my Baby (and I know she is not) I would use capital 'I' all the way through, but I am liking this, you. I am liking the sentiment running through.

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  7. Sounds like a man deeply in love. Love it Vik! :)

    Life's sweets and spices

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  8. Hey VickY! Well said pal! Who is this one for? ;))

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  9. @ Vee
    haha
    yeah you can say anything Big B...

    hugs bro...

    tc and cheers

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  10. @ SarahA

    Thanks sarah
    I'll try to keep the capital 'I' in mind next time for sure...

    tc n cheers

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  11. @ Liza

    :D lol
    love and me... haha are u kidding??
    lol


    tc

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  12. @ kulpreet

    She's the one who can't be named ;D

    thanks bro

    tc

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  13. Oh my...what a dreamlike poem! Sometimes ...what I don't like about being a poet is that ..you created sweet and lovely words only in a dream but if you begin to explore it in the real word..."It sucks more than a dream".

    But, yes...lovely post!

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  14. @ Mys Lyke Meeh

    I guess you are right...
    reality really sucks...

    thank you...and i have lost your blog url..plz share again.

    tc n cheers

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  15. Nice of you to visit my blog, but found no comment on my latest- 'Revelations' !?!

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  16. @ Smita Tewari

    Ohh did I miss something...
    Will be there soon...


    tc

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  17. beautiful!!
    hope reality never has to wake him up :)

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  18. i hope he sleeps forever...with her in his dreams..

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  19. :) i could feel it more and read it less

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  20. @ Pri

    thaks a lot pri...
    But reality did !

    hugs

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  21. @ smita

    He hopes that he would be heard one day !

    :)

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  22. those r loveliest movements... n surly a dream worth dreaming... :)

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  23. your poetry doesn't cost. It simply soothes...

    'He was living a dream'
    Pray for him to continue doing so!

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  24. to even have such a lovely dream to hold on to is blissful indeed!

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  25. @ saurabh

    can't agree more

    hugs bro

    thanks a lot mate

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  26. @ smita

    He hopes he doesn't dream anymore.
    He's tired now.

    Thanks a lot for appreciating his words...

    take care

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  27. @ kymberns

    were you at loss of words ??

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  28. @ Beauty and the Beast

    YOu comments are always welcome.

    I wish you knew what he's going through...

    tc n hugs

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  29. @ anwesa

    He wants to live it and be in that reality forever :D

    thanks a lot for commenting dear

    take care and hugs

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  30. @ American Desi

    YOu felt me dear,

    Thanks a ton

    I wish things could be a little different then they are.


    take care and hugs
    cheers

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  31. Lucky you! Let's pray the momentum sustains! :)

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  32. @眼光

    thanks and welcome here :)

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  33. @ Kulpreet

    I wish the momentum has sustained ;D

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