He's beside her; clasping her hand
staring at her innocent face; lost in dreams
lips;tender like rose petals
fighting the urge to kiss,to touch; He could never lose control
feeling sleepy; the shutters just won't close.
the sight was too precious; his eyes could never be sore
the smell of her hair,softness of her cheeks
He couldn't believe; He was living a dream
here
1 month ago
22 droplets:
Most is a dream. Maybe we're here to learn how to take control of our unbridled dreams, and ride them in the direction we must. Maybe the contrary, to learn how to unbridle our dreams and let them lead us wherever they could. But movement is always needed. Dynamics are the gold of nature.
exactly...movement is always needed.
:)
thank bro
tc n hugs
As I have often wrote here in comments I have this memory of a special time with a lady that I pray will never go away. This poem did much to help refresh that one, too short of a time.
I especially remember how her skin smelled as I held her.
@ BB
thanks bro. You know i also pray to never lose the memory i have.
I am so glad that you could connect to the poem.
tc n cheers
Wow, a horny poem.... Muhahahaha....
Sorry, just kidding.... After all I am allowed to say whatever crap I can...Hehe
If this my Baby (and I know she is not) I would use capital 'I' all the way through, but I am liking this, you. I am liking the sentiment running through.
Sounds like a man deeply in love. Love it Vik! :)
Life's sweets and spices
Hey VickY! Well said pal! Who is this one for? ;))
@ Vee
haha
yeah you can say anything Big B...
hugs bro...
tc and cheers
@ SarahA
Thanks sarah
I'll try to keep the capital 'I' in mind next time for sure...
tc n cheers
@ Liza
:D lol
love and me... haha are u kidding??
lol
tc
@ kulpreet
She's the one who can't be named ;D
thanks bro
tc
Oh my...what a dreamlike poem! Sometimes ...what I don't like about being a poet is that ..you created sweet and lovely words only in a dream but if you begin to explore it in the real word..."It sucks more than a dream".
But, yes...lovely post!
@ Mys Lyke Meeh
I guess you are right...
reality really sucks...
thank you...and i have lost your blog url..plz share again.
tc n cheers
Nice of you to visit my blog, but found no comment on my latest- 'Revelations' !?!
@ Smita Tewari
Ohh did I miss something...
Will be there soon...
tc
beautiful!!
hope reality never has to wake him up :)
Nice! You'll be heard someday!
@ Pri
thaks a lot pri...
But reality did !
hugs
@ smita
He hopes that he would be heard one day !
:)
those r loveliest movements... n surly a dream worth dreaming... :)
your poetry doesn't cost. It simply soothes...
'He was living a dream'
Pray for him to continue doing so!
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