when I gaze into her eyes,
I see an ocean of love
and a magical dove
I see...
Into a bright future,
a lovely nature
beneath the stars
lovers waging wars
an enchanted bliss
a slow kiss
magic in the air
her graceful flair
the sweetest secrets
no regrets
happiness surrounding
kisses pounding
the wonderful the beautiful
the endless and the dream.
This post is for someone I love,
witnesses are The night, the moon, and the stars up above ;D.
ME LIKES IT!!! Kisses pounding? Talk about the passion! lol I love this V, Really sweet and from the heart!
ReplyDeletelucky her to be showered by such words. lucky you to be able to love so passionately
ReplyDelete@ Hannah K :
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you liked it.
hahaha pounding kisses,Now how did I come up with this?;)
Yeps, this came absolutely from the heart.
I love her more then anything.
I am so happy
((Bearhugs)) NE
Take care
@ Mayz :
ReplyDeleteLucky me to have found her.
You were right a long time ago when u said that the memory has been created.
bearhugs bro
Take care
I like..!!
ReplyDeleteHeyyy!!!
ReplyDeleteMast likha hai tune:)
Kaha tha itne din?
Hows everything going?:)
:) not everyone is as lucky as you and for that you should celebrate every minute of togetherness with her!
ReplyDelete@ Vinz ::
ReplyDeleteThanks man .
@ Gauri :
ReplyDeleteThanks friend.
I was a little busy.
Everything is awesome as always.
Take care
@ Divaa Divine :
ReplyDeleteI Know.I am very very lucky.
We will be together someday.I will wait for that day.
Thanks DD
Pounding kisses....interesting !
ReplyDeleteLoved it!
Totally awesome words Vicky.
ReplyDeleteWow....
ReplyDeleteIn love!
@ Cinderella :
ReplyDelete*blush blush ;D
@ Priya :
ReplyDeleteThank you Priya.
I like them a lot ;)
@ jojo :
ReplyDeleteYes yes yes ...
Beautifully expressed.
ReplyDeleteEnjoy all the seasons n flavours of love :)
wow... every girl would love her guy writing poems for her.. a dream! :)
ReplyDeleteit was lovely
@ shas :
ReplyDeleteWelcome to rain-ville :)
I am enjoying all the seasons ...flavors I have yet to taste ;)
take care
@ Crazy Diamond :
ReplyDeleteI don't know about that .I just love to write for her. She's not a magician but a magic ;D
take care And thanks for being here after a long long time hehehe
You have always been a great poet but my friend I think you are getting even better.
ReplyDelete@ beach bum :
ReplyDeleteThanks Bro. I am just a normal guy in love ;D .
"An enchanted bliss...a slow kiss"
ReplyDeleteThat's called bringing things to life through words!
Brilliant expressions!
N I also loved your comment in which you say "she's not a magician...she's magic"
Awwww...now if only there were more lovers like you:-)
*sigh!sigh!*
@ Suruchi :
ReplyDeleteThank you Thank you :D
No words are enough to describe her,I maybe writing poems till eternity,they won't be enough.Nothing can do justice to her beautiful mind and soul.
Hahaha We're rare but there are more...just waiting round the corner.
Take care
Have a nice weekend.
hehehe :P gaya tu to :P
ReplyDelete@ raingirl :
ReplyDeleteHEhe haan bilkul ...ek na ek din yeh to hona hi tha.
Well, Speechless. What do I say? This poem, this thought, this whole Story is wonderful. I cannot believe I did not see this on your fb until now.
ReplyDeleteYou weaved your magic with this one. nice and on a journey that I would love to close my eyes and see it being replayed over and over again.
Chan
@ The Enchantress :
ReplyDeleteThis story is a fairytale.And remember all fairytale have happy endings.
You made it here and that is all that matters :D
I am not the one with magic ;) .
It plays in my mind everyday.
Take care n be good
Simply beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteI like your poetry a lot :)
@ short poems :
ReplyDeleteWelcome here Rekha.
The poetry,it's like my 'soul' out here.
take care
Being in love shows a person who he/she should be. Not everyone can express the feelings experienced when in love. All the best and wishing you much happiness.:)
ReplyDeletemagic in the air
ReplyDeleteher graceful flair.....
Lovely.....!!
@ indiaspecies :
ReplyDeleteLove is expression on one's values. Ain't it ? :D
Thank You n hugs
@ surbhi jain :
ReplyDeleteThanks dear ...words can never be enough.
@ MAria :
ReplyDeleteI knew you would .
Take care :)
Ah wonderful, beautiful and most importantly endless! Nicely put bro.. Congratulations on finding eternal love in this lifetime.:)
ReplyDelete@ The Enduring spirit :
ReplyDeleteThanks man :D
I never thought I would but Life's funny.
take care