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Thursday, May 6, 2010

BEAUTIFUL

BEAUTIFUL is...


being perfectly real
to follow your dreams
to be what you are meant to be

to fly around in thoughts
forgetting the droughts
sleeping under stars,
vanishing scars
watching it rain for hours
a laugh like flowers


wanting to go through it all over again,
still loving the pain
scattering light,
the first fight
to have a feeling that possesses,
to be alone in recesses
taking action,
reaching perfection


thought of you,
like morning dew

your eyes,your smile,
nothing venile

to witness you,
a myth that came true ;D

you in the morning,
cautiously warning

to breathe you,
in the hue

to grow old with you
to die with you

to ***seek you
an enchanted hope,out in the blue!

BEAUTIFUL is - ME with YOU.

***
To seek you is to seek me for myself.

17 comments:

  1. Beautiful is the magic that is shared between wonderful people, beit friends or beit romantic.

    Beauty is when you see that the inside is more than the outside could ever be...

    Beauty is... SO many things

    But you pinpointed so much. that right there shows how beautiful of a person you are.

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  2. It's soulful and lovely indeed.

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  3. yes beautiful and deep! how do u feel in such a wonderful manner at such young an age?
    must be terribly in love!
    keep the 'togetherness' alive!
    The Best!

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  4. This is truly amazing!!loved each n every word of it, so romantic.

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  5. Oh I simply love this piece. One of your bests ever, Vik!

    I would have done without the last to lines where you beagn again, "thats what...". Not necessary, the piece is a portrait that you just painted with your own eyes didnt you?

    "An enchanted hope, out in the blue.." is such an optimistic verse!

    Wondeful!!

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  6. beautiful is the way you see her...

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  7. That was beautiful, combined with the beauty of nature. :)

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  8. I loved it totally !!! It's too good! It's beautiful! :)
    You write so very well!!!

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  9. Its like lyrics to a song..

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  10. Excellent!!!

    Could easily see young lovers speaking the words to each other.

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  11. Hey thanks for the comment on my blog, thought I would come over and look at yours. I liked the pace and feeling of this poem, a reall welling up of love :)

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  12. why oh my this verses are awesome. is this for someone else? in love u?

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