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Saturday, May 1, 2010

My Match

She guides you gently
and unarguably
by the certain gravity
of an invisible feeling

quite like
an autumn leaf flying
an unseen drop in waterfall
a tossed hair in breeze

a lone star shining
in the dark night.
                                     You will always be more then a poem to me!

29 comments:

  1. beutiful!!...creating a calm n paeceful atmosphere!!

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  2. Oh, so breath takingly fresh!

    "...And unseen drop in waterfall...a tossed hair shining, in the dark night."

    Soul-filling Vik!

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  3. Hi Rainboy...
    Beautiful allegory...
    Simple striking expressions...
    So your forte
    Enjoyed breezing through:-)

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  4. Lovely! :)
    Cheers!
    Take Care!
    :-)

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  5. Beautiful thoughts... :)
    It's a really nice poem. :)

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  6. ah, visiting this space after quite some time...colorful template!

    I can use a star in the dark night! :)

    N

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  8. @ Hobo ........ ........ ........ ::

    same to you :D .

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  9. @ sakhii•• ::

    Thank you Dear.
    I just tried to be honest.

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  10. @ Cinderella ::

    ehehe Thank you...
    I am always looking forward to your comment . You made my day !!

    Thanks a lot dear.

    tc n hugs

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  11. @ suruchi ::

    Hey ;)
    Thank you :D !

    I love you blog...just had to say it. lol

    take care

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  12. @ 昱宏
    Thank you ...

    Now .. i can't decipher this 昱宏 .

    could u plz..comment and introduce yourself ? lol

    take care 昱宏 hehehe

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  13. @ Mys Lyke Meeh ::
    thanks MLM ...

    Me miss your blog...come back plzzz

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  14. @ Gauri Mathur ::

    Thanks gauri...

    Cheers and Take care

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  15. @ sakhii•• ::

    I have done that TAg...but I think I will comment the whole tag now for you. :)

    take care n hugs

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  16. @ Chocolatelover ::

    Thank you .

    I love your name chocolate lover. ;D
    too cute


    take care n cheers

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  17. @ Nothingman ::

    Oh ! Nottingman lol Nothingman is here. How are you Mr. rockstar.
    I have missed you reading,will try to drop by frequently :D
    provided you keep up with the fucked up posts.hahaha

    yeah, we all can haha

    cheers boy

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  18. @ ♫♪♥W!nK♥♪♫ :

    Well, It's hereditary ;D !!

    take care Wink...and be good

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  19. Amazing one. I loved it to the core. Specially the second stanza. Beautifully written :)
    *hugz*

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  20. @ ♫♪♥Lonely Dreamer♥♪♫ ::

    Thank you LD.
    hugs

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  21. "certain feeling of invisible gravity" absolutely captures the strong irresistible pull of love! Nice lines there bhai, short and hard hitting!

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  22. "certain feeling of invisible gravity" absolutely captures the strong irresistible pull of love! Nice lines there bhai, short and hard hitting!

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  23. @ The Enduring spirit :
    thanks man :D
    take care

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