She guides you gently
and unarguably
by the certain gravity
of an invisible feeling
quite like
an autumn leaf flying
an unseen drop in waterfall
a tossed hair in breeze
a lone star shining
in the dark night.
You will always be more then a poem to me!
Happy Mother's Day in-advance...
ReplyDeletebeutiful!!...creating a calm n paeceful atmosphere!!
ReplyDeleteOh, so breath takingly fresh!
ReplyDelete"...And unseen drop in waterfall...a tossed hair shining, in the dark night."
Soul-filling Vik!
Hi Rainboy...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful allegory...
Simple striking expressions...
So your forte
Enjoyed breezing through:-)
Dude...so nice!
ReplyDeleteLovely! :)
ReplyDeleteCheers!
Take Care!
:-)
u r tagged...hav a luk!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful thoughts... :)
ReplyDeleteIt's a really nice poem. :)
ah, visiting this space after quite some time...colorful template!
ReplyDeleteI can use a star in the dark night! :)
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ReplyDelete@ Hobo ........ ........ ........ ::
ReplyDeletesame to you :D .
@ sakhii•• ::
ReplyDeleteThank you Dear.
I just tried to be honest.
@ Cinderella ::
ReplyDeleteehehe Thank you...
I am always looking forward to your comment . You made my day !!
Thanks a lot dear.
tc n hugs
@ suruchi ::
ReplyDeleteHey ;)
Thank you :D !
I love you blog...just had to say it. lol
take care
@ 昱宏
ReplyDeleteThank you ...
Now .. i can't decipher this 昱宏 .
could u plz..comment and introduce yourself ? lol
take care 昱宏 hehehe
@ Mys Lyke Meeh ::
ReplyDeletethanks MLM ...
Me miss your blog...come back plzzz
@ Gauri Mathur ::
ReplyDeleteThanks gauri...
Cheers and Take care
@ sakhii•• ::
ReplyDeleteI have done that TAg...but I think I will comment the whole tag now for you. :)
take care n hugs
@ Chocolatelover ::
ReplyDeleteThank you .
I love your name chocolate lover. ;D
too cute
take care n cheers
@ Nothingman ::
ReplyDeleteOh ! Nottingman lol Nothingman is here. How are you Mr. rockstar.
I have missed you reading,will try to drop by frequently :D
provided you keep up with the fucked up posts.hahaha
yeah, we all can haha
cheers boy
@ ♫♪♥W!nK♥♪♫ :
ReplyDeleteWell, It's hereditary ;D !!
take care Wink...and be good
oh how nice!!
ReplyDeleteAmazing one. I loved it to the core. Specially the second stanza. Beautifully written :)
ReplyDelete*hugz*
@ Ria :
ReplyDeleteThank you Ria
@ ♫♪♥Lonely Dreamer♥♪♫ ::
ReplyDeleteThank you LD.
hugs
"certain feeling of invisible gravity" absolutely captures the strong irresistible pull of love! Nice lines there bhai, short and hard hitting!
ReplyDelete"certain feeling of invisible gravity" absolutely captures the strong irresistible pull of love! Nice lines there bhai, short and hard hitting!
ReplyDelete@ The Enduring spirit :
ReplyDeletethanks man :D
take care