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Wednesday, August 18, 2010

about all...


about today:
it hasn't rained like this in days
credits to devil and his delirious ways


about past:
I never wept from pain,
But I've cried from scars.


about dreams:
the crazy music of shattering dreams
it's tearing at my seams


about her:
she streams from heaven till dawn
a forest fire that keeps raging on


about family:
their annoying questions open me wide
submerging him inside in the tide


about me:
a spoiled child with soiled dreams

23 comments:

  1. Hey what's going on in your mind now a day? Thoughts that awakened your scars? Pretty interesting!

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  2. I can relate to this one: spoiled child and soiled dreams.

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  3. @ myslykemeeh ::

    mind is a mysterious being in itself.

    IF only I had as many cars as scars :P

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  4. @ (¯`•._.•[Raajii]•._.•´¯) ::

    :) hugs

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  5. @ trinitystar ::

    welcome... rainboy *smiles

    take care

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  6. I sent my spoiled child to his room just a few minutes ago, and soiled his dreams of seeing his girlfriend this weekend since I grounded him.

    I completely understand what you wrote about families, my in-laws drive me crazy.

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  7. @ beach bum ::

    hehe not fair to the child :P

    glad that I am not married hehe

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  8. I can relate to "about me" and "about past"...

    Simply beautiful! :)

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  9. Beautifuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuul RB!
    “I never wept from pain, but I’ve cried from scars”
    *bows down to you master*
    Emotional expressions like these are rare n so are u:-)
    More like a soiled child with spoiled dreams I’d say:-)

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  10. That's beautiful, rainboy! Please let your raindrops wash clean my soiled dreams. :-)

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  11. about past:
    I never wept from pain,
    But I've cried from scars.
    about family:
    their annoying questions open me wide
    submerging him inside in the tide...

    Ohh lovely.... This is really beautiful... loved it.

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  12. @ Chai Addict ::

    Thank you :)
    Take care

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  13. @ Suruchi ::

    hehe thank you ji :D

    at least you agree that I am a child :P

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  14. @ Sashindoubutsu ::

    :)
    feel the drops and they will ;)

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  15. @ Gazal Bharadwaj ::

    Thank you Gazal ...

    Take Care

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  16. i commented on this one already...I'm so lazy writing...really lazy that's why couldn't update my blog.. grrr. I need a kick! Red wine would be nice!

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  17. Wow! lovely. You described them in such a unique n original way :)

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  18. "...I never wept from pain, but have cried
    from scas..." no truer words have ever
    been written.

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