CarnEvil

Thursday, August 28, 2008

back in rains

back to rainville
dark black clouds
rumbling noises
falling raindrops
a thought
sounds of lightning strikes
the wind,the smell,the rain
At last no sun,no sweat, all pain.

an unexpected change of events
calls for an unexpected change of my mind
sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep all day
unpolished and battered
swallowed by confusion
i need someone...
someone to cheer me up
someone to uncork me
someone to make me sleep
someone to hold me tight
someone with those hugs
someone with that touch
someone to take a shower in my mind

He can't understand what it is
but i bet it is.

he makes a face & says "Vik you need to be colder than hypothermia
to walk on this path".

19 comments:

  1. Hehe....ab kya confusion? Let me know what is bothering you....and let me that someone!!!!

    Waise bhi....you owe me atleast that much for not visiting me!!!!

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  2. emotions is the inner feeling of one for the other.emotions are vanishing as people are being selfish towards others.

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  3. "rainville.." !

    Ah, how apt a term !

    Everyone deserves love, and so shall we get...sooner or later. I believe.

    Perhaps my latest post will interest you. Glad to have you back again dear. I thought you were gonna take longer.

    :)

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  4. sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep sleep all day


    is a cool line...

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  5. hey welcome back mate....good to see u back to rainville ;)

    as Cindy said it....just perfect ;)

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  6. You always need someone when you are in the rain and that feelings is beautiful.

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  7. Welcome back bro!Missed you,missed these rains,missed these lovely verses.

    Don't ever get hypothermic samje,the body might become warm again but not the heart.

    Take care.

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  10. Welcome back, V.
    You make it through forests and mountains, and deserts and exams, and the seven seas and, finally, here you are... "Mr. Parmar, I suppose".

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  11. @ Princess Mia
    thank you ji thank you

    @ Priya
    it sure is...when will i have that someone.. ;)

    @ *~*{Sameera}*~*
    thanku tahnku sis
    aate hi daantana shuru..hehe
    ok ji ok...i will tell him so.

    @ Cinderella.
    why did u delete your comments..??
    you were right there.i didn't meant this place to be rainville.it is the place where i live..my hometown,my village.

    @ runnerfrog
    yaa Mr. parmar is here man.
    thanx man.

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  12. @ hope
    ahh..feels so gud to be back here.
    thank you

    @ Gagan
    what's bothering me ? u really don't know??
    sure u can be that someone..lol
    dude u know i had to leave on 25th morning..and u weren't free remember..u had to call me :D

    @ rose
    people are always selfish..i am too..everyone is dear..just think about it.

    @ rain girl
    ??? didn't understand you sis?

    @ Cinderella
    thank you ji
    the prob is that i don't believe,,believing has already shown me hell...will drop by soon.

    @ Tiger
    a long line too ..hehe

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  13. Umm..I thought she might take an offense..and I might be wrong.

    Didnt wanna look so damn presumptous and a snotty miss cranky pants !

    Its ok. Good thing is you read it.

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  14. yep i sure did.

    and i don't think there was anything offensive with what you wrote..

    tc..

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  15. Hi dear,
    Well being born in the month of September, i can feel so well the wonderful poem u shared on rain..

    And thank u so much for going through my blog "humming Today",and also commenting which is indeed worth knowing the small n sweet review!
    Its encourageing!

    Thank U so much..
    I also like ur blog and shall be looking forward to visit it frequently in future :)


    Celebrate Life..

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  16. *smiling*
    welcome here
    will be awaiting your says.

    take care and have a nice day :)

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If you have read and understood the post and have something to say.Be my guest.

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